Panorama
Vivid droplets dancing on the leaves,
Early morn' dew licking the grass,
Air ,pure,limpid and thick liken to glass,
And a grey transluscent veil acts as eaves!
An aged tree of lore hinders,
A slow wind fighting to pass amidst,
Gnarled twisted branches root the mist ,
An aura of peace transcending reality lingers..
No melody as beautiful as this silence,
Ever settled upon this forgotten knoll,
A benign beauty beseeching human soul,
Commanding harmony, commanding our senses...
The spring balm fragrance of faraway fruits,
Consumes one, evoking transports of joy,
Thought and Spirit capitulate to a rivulet,coy,
Arousing the scent of damp mud and tender roots...
Raising goosebumps for a time brief,
Pleasantly cool condensed drops roll down the skin.
Never having felt a feeling akin,
Moist eyes shed warm tears sans laugther,sans grief.
Rhyme Scheme [a,b,b,a]
Early morn' dew licking the grass,
Air ,pure,limpid and thick liken to glass,
And a grey transluscent veil acts as eaves!
An aged tree of lore hinders,
A slow wind fighting to pass amidst,
Gnarled twisted branches root the mist ,
An aura of peace transcending reality lingers..
No melody as beautiful as this silence,
Ever settled upon this forgotten knoll,
A benign beauty beseeching human soul,
Commanding harmony, commanding our senses...
The spring balm fragrance of faraway fruits,
Consumes one, evoking transports of joy,
Thought and Spirit capitulate to a rivulet,coy,
Arousing the scent of damp mud and tender roots...
Raising goosebumps for a time brief,
Pleasantly cool condensed drops roll down the skin.
Never having felt a feeling akin,
Moist eyes shed warm tears sans laugther,sans grief.
Rhyme Scheme [a,b,b,a]
4 comments:
hey Ash....
great work i luved these parts
"No melody as beautiful as this silence"( excellent simily... felt like music to me...cud here sound...hehe... cud i use that as a caption for my blog goes well with the name silentdecibel :-))
Arousing the scent of damp mud and tender roots...(munu vasana....wow...what a description)
Moist eyes shed warm tears sans laugther,sans grief... that was a perfect finish.... really touching
keep it goin.... when do u plan to arrange the next trip to The Shire ,middle earth
Moist eyes shed warm tears sans laugther,sans grief...
My favourite line...
:)
great stuff ashwin.. Keep them coming..
Machi.. Gethu... Nee peter nu enakku theriyum. Aana, classical-peter nu ippo dhaan therinjukitaen..
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